Writing

Tautoro School desperately  needs a hall

WALT: know structure & language features of an explanation writing text. Date: 18/02/19

Frist of all: At Tautoro School our school needs a hall.

Because the students have hardly any space in the library

they all get squished.

If we get a hall we can do kapa haka in the new hall.

Second: Also why Tautoro school needs a hall because our school.

gets more students through the years it will make more space.

changes for seniors and juniors for Tautoro school

Lastly: Also, the students will be happy to have a new hall for working in for like,

Fridays when students classes do assemblies. why do the Tautoro school need a hall?

conclusion: One fact Tautoro school never had a hall before in the hole years

this Kura had been around.

this community really needs a hall because it will make big changes for

Tautoro school like space, assemblies, powhiris.

Identifying statement so our kura really is desperately in a big need for a hall.

Because our students and teachers are squashed in the library.

When it's a raining day at lunchtime, after school bus runs we could be able to use a hall...

But instead we have a library.

Explanation Sequence: A explanation sequences is reasons.

One reason why tautoro school really needs a hall because

we have hardly any space in the library to use.

Another reasons is beacue if its raining we could use the hall to play in when its raining and

have lots of space to do danceing , kapahaka , readding