WALT: writing about one day in the holiday

Monday 16 october  2017                                                       On Tuesday  I went to whangarei with my

Aunty and Mum,sister rangi we went to burger king for a lunch stop and sushi it was nice it was a sunny day  then we went to my Aunt's and played with my little cousin’s and patten ,baby,my sister rangi   

Then patten and my little cousin's,rangi played tag and then we all went to the shop we buyed some lollies then went back to my aunty house we played and ate the lollies it was fun then we waited for my mum to come back with the pizza we had tea and then went to play patten went home then we played with keza we all played find the people it was fun then we sat down and watch some t.v it was fun then my came back when it was dark  we got some chocolate  then said bye and then got in the car and ate more lollies with my sister and some fizzy i fell asleep on the way home i got up when we were there and then watched a horror when i got home then i fell asleep in my bed  the movie was scary movie called