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Wednesday, May 1, 2019

WALT: write an Recount and make it more interesting for our readers.

BIG HOLIDAY!! 

I woke up and it was a bright morning I looked up and saw birds out the window when I heard my mom and sister yelling about
”chocolate bunnies “I thought is it really the day!!?,” My Mom said “bunny for my tummy “I said “what no!?” She said” hurry up
get up  make your bed clean ur face and do our hair then you will get ur bunnies” I, “said hmph okay!” Then I got up
and ran down the hallway to the bathroom washed my face did my hair then ran back to my room and made my bed went
to the lounge and then I saw my sister and mom my mom was opening the plastic bag with the chocolate bunnies in it I was
like finally, the day has come ! my sister said “ Move fatty “ to me I was like “no Rangi I was there first”  she said
“No I was fatty “I said, “wow okay Rangi”.

Then I moved over for Rangi because she was so bossy then my mom finally got the plastic bag open Rangi grabbed her
chocolate bunny out of the bag so then I got mine ran to my room shut my door then went to sit on my bed and opened the
box with the chocolate bunny in it there was plastic with tape on the top of the tip of the plastic  so I took the tape off then
finally got the chocolate bunny out of the plastic and then my mom came and took a photo of me and my chocolate bunny.

After she left  I ate the chocolate bunny ears it was the yummiest chocolate I had before that was a lie I found out I had white
oreo
chocolate and that was the best chocolate I have had before then I went to see what Rangi was up too I saw her bunny
almost done  it was eaten from the head to its belly I said “wow Rangi you can eat chocolate “ she said sh fatty” I said “oh okay
alright you going to play movie star planet with me?” She said “maybe later fatty” I went back to my room.

Later Then Went on my Chromebook to  played movie star planet I logged onto my account and waited for it to load
then it finally loaded so I texted my friends They said: “hey wait what are you doing?” I said, “nothing much just eaten
chocolate what about you?” They said “oh the same thing just bored, “ I said “lol same “ Then I went on youtube and
watched the Ace family I watched Austin McBroom get pied in the face from Catherine pairs  It was so funny After it ended
I watched MSP versions of songs. Then got bored so Then I turned on my speaker and started singing and dancing It was so
fun then Rangi came in and said “what you doing fatty?” so I stopped dancing and singing and turned down the music and then
talked to Rangi she Talked about MSP and chocolate I said “hmm don’t you want to play msp?” she “said yes!”
I said “okay let's play MSP then,” She said okay fatty “ we played for about 6 hours my mom called out “dinner time
Wai, Rangi “ so we got up and ran down the hallway and went to the table and sat down on the chairs.



After me and her had dinner we went back playing  MSP for another 5 hours I felt tired and it was 3:00 am so I lay down
on my bed and grabbed my Chromebook and the started  to watch youtube I looked up “how to cake it” and the youtube made
a Giant panda cakes and cupcakes, even a banana split cake Then I fell asleep and that was my big holiday!.

2 comments:

  1. ki-ora Wai,I really enjoyed listening to your extraordinary holiday,It must of been fun eating a giant sized chocolate bunny,and playing MSP for 5 hours is a record,Have a good one sincerely chrystalle.

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    1. Thank you Chrytsalle! nga mihi Waihemonga.

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