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Monday, February 26, 2018

Bucket Filling

WALT: write an explanation text about 'Bucket Filling'.
Success Criteria:  I will
  • Have a title, introduction, description, process and conclusion
  • Use topic specific vocabulary
  • self-assess myself to see where I think I am writing at.

How to be a Bucket Filler.

Everyone has a bucket filler by being so kind and helping new kid’s in our  school and make them feel welcome 
Everyone has  bucket filler would  be kind and nice  and make new kid’s welcome to my school and make sure there not lost at all.
When someone is being kindness by doing nice things
When you make someone have joy by being happy and fun with other people.
When you give people happiness to people you make their day
Bucket filler is important by making people day and happiness in the world  and it filter out bucket every day it our feeling’s  well it is but it kind to be nice to people.


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Level: 2a

Thursday, December 7, 2017

WALT: About my year at Tautoro school.

Friday 7 december 2017
WALT: About my year at Tautoro school.
My first day when i went to tautoro school
I had a profit and then went to room 4 it was cool i made some friends and even my sister started
at the same time as me and she is in room 5 with whaea Lana. so i would
play handball at school at play time use to the i started doing stuff on the park
And played with rangi and her bff yvette that was cool yvette and me became friends and i like having maths in room 5  
It’s fun and we get to do blogging and we learn lots of maths for what
my class is doing  and writing is my other favorite too
It is fun and we do lots of it just like am doing it now  it is fun
writing and reading i love reading book’s when we do ssr i would read and i love art i like to draw and draw
when  it’s ssd and bloging is fun too

And i like drawing and making cards with my drawinFriday 7 december 2017
WALT: About my year at Tautoro school.
My first day when i went to tautoro school
I had a profit and then went to room 4 it was cool i made some
friends and even my sister started at the same time as me and she is in room 5 with whaea Lana.
so i would play handball at school at play time use to the i started doing stuff on the park
And played with rangi and her bff yvette that was cool yvette and me became friends and i like having maths in room 5  
It’s fun and we get to do blogging and we learn lots of maths for what my class is doing  and writing is my other favorite too
It is fun and we do lots of it just like am doing it now  it is fun writing and reading i love reading book’s
when we do ssr i would read and ssd i love art i like to draw and draw when  it’s ssd and bloging is fun too

And i like drawing and making cards with my drawinFriday 7 december 2017
WALT: About my year at Tautoro school.
My first day when i went to tautoro school
I had a profit and then went to room 4 it was cool i made some friends and even my sister started
at the same time as me and she is in room 5 with whaea Lana. so i would play handball at school
at play time use to the i started doing stuff on the park
And played with rangi and her bff yvette that was cool yvette and me became friends and i like having maths in room 5  
It’s fun and we get to do blogging and we learn lots of maths for what my class is doing  and writing is my other favorite too
It is fun and we do lots of it just like am doing it now  it is fun writing and reading i love reading book’s
when we do ssr i would read and ssd i love art i like to draw and draw when
 it’s ssd and bloging is fun too Friday 7 december 2017
WALT: About my year at Tautoro school.
My first day when i went to tautoro school
I had a profit and then went to room 4 it was cool i made some friends and even my sister started
at the same time as me and she is in room 5 with whaea Lana. so i would play handball at school at
play time use to the i started doing stuff on the park
And played with rangi and her bff yvette that was cool yvette and me became friends and i like having maths in room 5  
It’s fun and we get to do blogging and we learn lots of maths for what my class is doing  and writing is my other favorite too
It is fun and we do lots of it just like am doing it now  it is fun writing and reading i love reading book’s
when we do ssr i would read and ssd i love art i like to draw and draw when  it’s ssd and bloging is fun too

Thursday, November 16, 2017

WALT write storys

I think the journey is awesome and cool i would love to do it and hope that i would go far then wild boy he has a cool story about him and he must of went prty far and he meet lots of cool animals and he seen some cool places too.


I would love to see all those places and  go and see some people around the north island of new zealand
I agree withe the statement that the journey is more important


 
1lee i would love to go around the hole north island of new zealand


2lee you would just want to do it to be famous or go see beautiful places and don’t have to pay to do this and be the first person to do this.

3lee i would love to see all the Animals
That wild boy saw and play with them and i want to go hunting for food to and find seafood to eat too.

4 and have a camp out too its fun.

Sunday, November 12, 2017

WALT do Re Reo story translate

Tittle: I Aha koe?
Maori:
I tu ahau pēnei te kaki roa
I  hikoi ahau pēnei i te arewhana
I pi ki ahau i te pea i poipoi ahau
pēnei i te makimaki
I peke ahau pēnei i te poraka
I oma ahau pēnei i te  rapeti
I noho ahau pēnei i te punua kuri
I inu ahau pēnei i te punua ngeru
I kai ahau pēnei i te kitere i takoto ahau pēnei i te kiore
I moe ahau pēnei i te tuatete i tu ahau i hikoi ahau i peke ahau i peke ahau i oma ahau noho ahau i inu ahau i kai ahau i takoto ahau i moe ahau korero mai i aha koe
                                                                                                            
                                  
English:
I stood here as a long neck
I walked like a bicycle
I was hit by a bear that was nursed
such as a monkey
I laughed like the block
I ran like a rabbit
I was sitting like a dog dog
I drank like cats
I ate as if I had dreamed like a mouse

I slept like the one I had walked when I laughed I laughed I was sitting and I was drinking I ate I fell asleep and told me what you did

Tuesday, October 31, 2017

WALT is a bout kate shappard

WALT story writing

Little red and the wolf  


             Chapter 1            
By Waihemonga                                       
 illustrated by Waihemonga


Once upon a time there lived a girl named me Little Red i loved my life and everyone that loved me...then one day  my mother died when i was a 5 year old  & my father gave me up for adoption and yet no-one wanted me. so i  had to lived alone and had no-one to live with & no-one to trust. As i got older the age 11 i started to cooking my own food and making my own clothes...i was a hard worker a lot, almost like Cinderella.Then one day my nan was sick so she call me Little Red and i  said yes i loved to come   over so i  cooked some  cookies & cupcakes & cake then i went off with my bag of the food and on my way to my Nan’s house.


chapter 2                              going to my  nan’s house
               
Off  i went to nan’s i was so happy to see someone from my family off i  went the easy way the dark frost no one goes there but i could take the long way naaaa i said  it was 5 blocks away so off i went to the dark frost then i heard the man yell stop  i went to him and said no i'm going to my nan’s the man said ok but there a big bad wolf if you bring food in there you will need to hide it he'll steal them and if you don't give time he'll eat your family and you don't tell him where you live or where you're going ok he’ll kill you ok we were ok old man i said why should i leasion to that man he look’s like he’s homeless i'm not sure to trust him so off i go to the dark frost it look’s old and there lot’s of home’s with t.v’s food i should move here and the i heard a noise some thing watching me it’s baby wolf there so cute the the dad comes out and says come on kids back in side sorry my kid’s are very bad ow sorry i'm going to my nan’s ok bye say me  ok bye says the wolf i say what a kind wolf the we become best friends  we talk lost and  play we were having fun and no  
  Chapter 3

The wolf took me to nan’s and i showed him nans new cooking part of the house it was so cool when i showed him nan told him to get out or i'll kill you i said that’s my friend she said that’s not your  friend i went looking for him he was long gone i went to his house where i met him he was not there his wife said she said she has not seen him all day and i said he ran away becues my nan was rude when i saw him